Deathless -

To mourn failure of the subtle lure

This narrow vision towards

Hear the words, so it does

Something strange, cold and impure

The sureness of things, for the insecure

The non-feeling are right because

Popularity holds the form

Leads directly to blindness

Erasing any sign of the ones who fall

To be deathless instead of old

Circling to settle for

A cage much smaller than the one

Erasing any sign of the one who fell

To be deathless and walk through hell

If I accept your version you will have to change it

You just keep pushing on

Forward